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    Here's a new one. I'll post more as I come up with them. I'm feeling inspired lately. wink

    Should We Be?
    11/8/00

    If I could be who you wanted me to be
    Or who I feel I should be,
    Perhaps the journey would be short and sweet.
    Maybe you could be who I want you to be
    And save me from viewing myself through the
    Distorted glass of my scared reality.
    I?ll take my steps, one baby at a time
    And only ask you to take yours too, just follow mine.
    When we meet as one, we can look and laugh at
    The times of ?issues? and ?falling too fast? and
    Know the journey was really worth the time and
    Trials that set us in the glory of this new reality.


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    Branflakes. It's what's for breakfast.
    The original ninja lesbian milk getter.
    The one called "brain" and "brandiflakes" and....
    I'm tired of the silent majority. Silence equals death.
    Life is what you make it.
    "I believe you can't control or choose your sexuality"-Savage Garden
    God never gives us more than we can handle.
    You're going to have to deal with my ego at some point.

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    Red face

    smile

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    2 new ones. Still might need some work...

    Between Two Words
    11/15-11/21/00

    I wish there was a word between like and love.
    A word I could whisper in your ear
    And roll off my tongue with its full flourish
    Of how I feel for you. Love hasn?t yet awakened,
    But I?ve traveled beyond ?like?, such an autistic word
    To express how I feel for you.
    It?s far away, beneath my contemplation
    Of what we have together.
    I?m on the cliff, debating the fall into ?love?
    With its blessed beauty I crave to have with you.
    For now I?ll wait, impatient in my stance, of needing to express that
    Which language refuses to allow my heart to revel and reveal.
    May this time bound to cliff be brief.

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    Touch My Mind
    11/21/00

    Kiss my skin and touch my mind.
    All I ask is that you don?t leave me behind
    When life draws you away to what?s beyond
    This box I live and world I show.
    I?ll grab the strength that?s needed to tow
    My heart after yours, forever more.
    My mind?s learning more about what I can do,
    When kiss and touch make me feel
    Far more than I?ve ever yearned.



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    Branflakes. It's what's for breakfast.
    The original ninja lesbian milk getter.
    The one called "brain" and "brandiflakes" and....
    I'm tired of the silent majority. Silence equals death.
    Life is what you make it.
    "I believe you can't control or choose your sexuality"-Savage Garden
    God never gives us more than we can handle.
    You're going to have to deal with my ego at some point.

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    I like the first one a lot, well of the new two, and I love LOVE the metaphor of time as autistic! Great job!

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    "What you should be doing with me..."

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    Thanks, Oz. smile

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    Branflakes. It's what's for breakfast.
    The original ninja lesbian milk getter.
    The one called "brain" and "brandiflakes" and....
    I'm tired of the silent majority. Silence equals death.
    Life is what you make it.
    "I believe you can't control or choose your sexuality"-Savage Garden
    God never gives us more than we can handle.
    You're going to have to deal with my ego at some point.

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    Senses with You
    11/27/00

    Hearing your voice puts a smile on my face.
    Seeing you puts a smile on my heart.
    Smelling your skin puts my thoughts in a whirl.
    Touching you puts passion in my bones.
    Being with you sends peace into my soul.

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    Lightbulb

    Lightning Struck
    12/3/00-12/4/00

    I feel lightning struck by your touch.
    Your blue flame eyes melt my soul,
    While warmth surrounds at your hold.

    A storm of feelings envelope my mind,
    While fire rages within my heart.

    Blessing revealed by your passion desires,
    I ponder this gift,
    Received from Heaven, I wonder.

    Eclipse these fears,
    I sing to my heart.
    Wanting nothing more
    Than our suns of tomorrow,
    My lightning struck mind
    Reveals my path of sole follow.
    Within your flame warmth, I melt my sorrows.

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    My Heart Tries To Speak
    12/4/00

    My heart is stampeding,
    My nerves are a shatter,
    I?m crying these tears
    Of happy fears.
    God it?s hard to speak my part
    Of what I feel and want to start.
    With you I see my forever tomorrows.
    But contained inside, I tend to reside.
    Afraid of reproach, unknown to this approach
    Of revealing myself, bread to a knife,
    My soft side shown, my feelings known.
    I hope you will wait
    Through my cranial debate.
    For once I can seal within,
    That where I?ve never been,
    I?ll stand with you
    And forever be true.


    [This message has been edited by Branflakes (edited December 08, 2000).]

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    all very good bran.

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